How Do You Plot?

Next week I’ll be on a panel at Sleuthfest where we’ll all be talking about our methods of plotting a mystery. That’s had me thinking. How do I plot a story, be it a mystery or a romance?

 When I first started writing (eons ago) I really had no idea how to plot, which my first attempts truly showed. That was when I started looking at books I’d read and liked and tried to figure out how those writers put together a story. By my third attempt at writing a romance, I was doing better. I even interested an editor and ultimately found an agent who wanted to represent me. That particular story never sold, but that was back in the days when we could sell a book on a synopsis and three chapters, so my agent made me start writing synopses. Writing a synopsis before you’ve written the book can teach you a lot.

 It forced me to started reading books about plotting, which, in turn, taught me the three act structure (beginning, middle, and end) and about turning points. I’ve always found beginnings fun. That’s when I get to give all the important information: who the main characters are, the time period, setting, and major conflict. I rarely, however, found that act took up a third of the book. More like the first quarter, if that much.

I also like endings. That’s when the conflict is resolved and our hero and heroine (I was writing romances back then) realize they are meant to be together and we have the happily ever after ending. Endings, also, rarely ever take up a third of the book. So that leaves the middle, which often becomes the sagging middle.

What do you do with the middle?

It was The Writers Journey, by Chris Vogler (based on Joseph Campbell’s The Hero with a Thousand Faces), that gave me the information I needed for the sagging middle. If you’ve read either of those books, you know the structure begins with the hero’s (could be male or female) ordinary world and moves to a call for adventure. Basically the first few steps the hero goes through comprise act one. It’s what comes after that stage that has helped me structure the middle. In this act (the middle) the hero meets allies and enemies and is tested. In this section the hero is growing and changing, facing and conquering fears, real or imagined. It’s after going through all of these ordeals (which intensify as the story progresses) that the hero is ready to face the major conflict. By the end of the middle section the hero is stronger and now has something of value (perhaps merely an understanding of her self-worth or maybe an actual weapon).  The ending (act three), then, is where the hero meets and defeats the enemy or finds the elixer and returns to his or her ordinary life a changed person. Now she’s ready for love, or now he has his reward.

Nowadays before I start a story, I write a synopsis (one for my eyes, not an editor’s or agent’s). Sometimes it’s in story form, and sometimes it looks like an outline. I put in the key scenes that develop both the character and the conflict, introduce the mentor (ally) or mentors, shapeshifters, enemies, and tests. I decide how, as a result of these tests, my protagonist will have changed and grown (or discovered the villain). Of course there will be the darkest moment when all seems lost, so part of my plotting will be deciding how my hero will meet the challenges, how I can show him teetering on the brink of failure and yet ultimately succeed.

Once I have those decisions made, I’m ready to write.

Does this mean I never change the story idea once I’ve written the synopsis or outline? No. This is merely a guideline for me. A road map. Once my characters take over, they can either follow it or veer off on a side road, but I usually find they work their way back to the original path. That’s what makes the writing fun.

So how do you plot?

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P.S. THE CROWS is now available in paperback on Amazon.com. My last try was successful.

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READ THE GUIDELINES!

 I’m always getting after my husband, who buys something and then tries to make it work without reading the instructions. And I’m always telling new writers to go to the agent’s or publisher’s web site and read the guidelines before formatting or submitting any work.

 Well, now I’m the one at fault. Last week I proudly announced the trade paperback edition of The Crows would soon be available. I thought it would be. I’d made what I thought were the necessary changes in my ms (which I had uploaded to Kindle for an e-book), had uploaded the file to CreateSpace, had a cover created, and filled out all the other necessary parts (description, price, tags, etc.). I’d ordered a proof and awaited my first view of the final product.

 Well, the proof arrived, and it wasn’t what I’d expected.

 Now, CreateSpace had sent a notification that my margins didn’t fit the 6×9 size I’d selected so they’d had to modify the font size, but I really didn’t think that would be a big deal…until I saw my proof. If you use a magnifying glass, the font size isn’t too bad. (Actually, I’ve purchased paperbacks with the same font size, but I hate reading them. It’s very tiring on the eyes.)

 It was then that I went back to the CreateSpace site and ACTUALLY READ the guidelines for formatting a 6×9 book. And guess what? I hadn’t formatted my ms correctly.

 Last week I spent two days working with the formatting. Most of the slowdown was due to two things. The first problem was WORD. (I do not get along well with that program). I couldn’t figure out how to get the header and footer to come out the way I wanted. I finally went back to CreateSpace and used their template for formatting a 6×9 book.

 I thought that would solve all my problems (header, footer, and numbering were all coming out right), but every time I uploaded the file, a quick check showed my text was bleeding over my margins. I uploaded three files, each time thinking I’d corrected the problem, only to discover the same problem was there. I was ready to scream, so I left the computer and watched TV for some time. And then, after my husband had gone to bed, and just as I was thinking I’d call it a day, I realized what was wrong.

 In using CreateSpace’s template, I had added a page. What that did was change which side of the book became my first page. Instead of starting on the right side, chapter one started on the left side. That changed the gutter size through out the book. All I had to do was add one blank page before chapter one and the next preview showed everything fell into place.

 I’ve ordered another proof. Cross your fingers (I have mine crossed). I think everything will come out right. I’ll know when I see it.

 Tune in next week, but meanwhile, if you’re going to self-publish or publish an e-book, I strongly suggest you read the guidelines.

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Rebirth of THE CROWS

Coming soon: The Crows by Maris Soule

Of course The Crows had its initial birth December 2007 as a hardcover published by Five Star mysteries. Then, about a year and a half later, it had a rebirth as an audio book put out by BooksinMotion. And, of course, once I had the rights back, The Crows became available as an e-book.

 That should be enough copies, right? Well, I’ve discovered it isn’t. Although used copies of the hardcover version are available, ranging in price from a few dollars to eighty some dollars, the book itself is out of print, and I don’t have any more copies to sell. Readers who buy and/or read As the Crow Flies, the second book in the P.J. Benson series, who haven’t read The Crows have been asking where they can get the first book. If they own an e-reader, I tell them to buy the e-book, but there are still many readers who prefer to hold a book in their hands, turn pages, and smell print.

 For several months now I’ve been checking publishers/printers who could create a trade paperback version of The Crows. I finally decided to go with the gorilla in the room: Amazon’s CreateSpace.

 One reason I chose CreateSpace is there’s no upfront cost. The writer must do most of the work, but what that involves is going through the program’s step by step process to upload a print-ready file, a cover, decide on a cost, and decide where/how the book should be marketed. Since I’d already uploaded the file for the e-book market, I only had to make a few revisions and that part was done. Getting a cover was more difficult. I didn’t need just the front of the book, but the front, side, and back. Moreover, I really wanted the same cover that had been on the hardcover version. That meant I had to get permission from the cover artist.

 That took the most time, not because those artists are slow, but because once I was quoted what it would cost me to use that original cover, I had to decide if I wanted to spend that much money. For a while I thought I’d save money and try something on my own, something close to what the original cover looked like. After all, I majored in art in college. How difficult could it be?

 I forgot how long it’s been since I’ve done any serious painting, and I’d never tackled a full cover (front/side/back). A few tries on my part and I decided to write the check.

 Today I ordered my “proof” of the trade paperback version of The Crows. It should be delivered next week. That’s when I’ll see how all of this looks. I’m hoping I did everything right. If I did, the rebirth of The Crows will be complete. I feel like an expectant mom.

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Linked In?

I joined Linkedin this week. For months I’ve received invitation to join, mostly from people I didn’t know. I think they simply invited everyone on their email address list. A couple of invitation came from people I did know, but when I asked them what the advantage was, they weren’t sure.

Now that I’ve joined Linkedin, I’m not sure either. There are some people who belong that I haven’t “talked” to for a long time. I was glad to “link up” with them. And those who fill in the information have interesting pages. However, what I’ve discovered so far is many of the people I’m “linked with” don’t have anything showing other than very basic information.

One of the reasons I joined this time was the invitation came from a friend/writer I know fairly well. She doesn’t normally join all of these social groups and is so well known, she really doesn’t need to join in order to sell books. I figured if she joined, maybe I should, too.

 Also I recently looked at the web site of an agent, and one of the things the agent wants in a query letter (sent via e-mail) is what social groups the writer belongs to, such as Facebook, Twitter, and Linkedin. (There were a couple others on the agent’s list that I hadn’t heard of before. Guess I’ll have to look into those.) Since I’m nearing completion of the story I’ve been working on for over a year and would love to get an agent to handle it, I decided I’d better make sure I could show I belonged to at least some of the required social networks.

The problem is, as I see it, how can a writer ever find the time to write and also keep up with all these social networks? And what do you say? I’m certainly not going to start posting what I do every day. (Got up, had coffee, fed the dog, had more coffee, walked the dog, etc.) And when I’m working on a story, I don’t like to “talk” about it. Which means I’m usually either commenting on others’ postings (which I enjoy doing) or posting some sort of promotion (which can be a turn off if done too often).

 Anyway, for better or worse, I’m now Linkedin. Want to link up with me? (Oh, that sounds naughty.) http://www.linkedin.com/pub/maris-soule/47/320/512

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Killing: Resolutions and husbands

 I’ve certainly killed my resolution to blog once a week. What I thought would be a two—maybe three—week hiatus while my husband and I traveled down to Florida and then took a cruise has turned into a much longer time period. In part the reason is I’m not sure what I want to blog about. I feel it needs to be something helpful to others, otherwise why should I expect people to come read my blogs? The other part (reason I haven’t blogged) is just plain laziness. Or maybe it’s that I’m having too much fun in the sun.

Also, as many of you know, I have a problem with being told I need to have a media presence in order to sell books (or even get published). I understand the logic of that, especially nowadays with so many writers able to be “published” via e-books, but really, all I want to do is write.

Anyway, I have been writing and will be doing so for the next month. I want to bring a FINISHED ms with me to Sleuthfest the end of February and to do so I need to stay off the social media and concentrate on that ms. So if you don’t see many postings from me on Facebook or Twitter or any of the lists I’m on, or if I miss a week or two of blogging, I hope you’ll understand that it’s because I’m working on my ms. (I am getting close to the end.)

Meanwhile, I am serious hoping nothing happens to my husband, because if he should disappear or die by any means other than natural, I’m in big trouble. If the police go through my computer to see what I’ve been looking up and reading lately, they’ll certainly take me away in cuffs. For example, in the last month, these are the subject lines that have appeared in my email box: Sniping and weaponry information; How to electrocute your husband without getting caught; Blood in drain; Cleaning blood up; Buried alive?; Murder gone wrong.

Yep, I’d be in big trouble if anything happens to him.

Love you, Bill.

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Staying on Course

Ever notice if you look off to the side while driving that your car starts to go in that direction? At least that’s what happens to me. A quick glance is all right, but if I look to the side too long, I head that direction.  My best driving is when I keep my eyes straight ahead, on the road. That’s what gets me safely to my destination.

 

There’s a parallel in writing. We set goals, but if we truly want to reach those goals, we have to make sure we don’t get sidetracked. We need to keep our eyes on those goals.

Ah, but it is so easy to get sidetracked. You’re working on a story, when suddenly you get an idea for something new. Something exciting and maybe better. So what do you do?

Some people put the original story aside and start the second story, and then, at a later date, come back to the original story. Maybe that works for those people, but it doesn’t for me. I’m always getting ideas for new stories and when I do, they always sound more exciting than the story I’m working on. Why? Because those ideas usually come when I’ve reached a point in my original story where I’ve lost that initial excitement. Maybe it’s the sagging middle. Maybe it’s because I’ve discovered my word count isn’t where it should be, and I’m not sure what to add that will enhance the story rather than simply pad. Whatever the reason, it’s easy at that point to think something else might work better.

But I know from experience that if I stop and start the new idea, chances are I won’t come back to the original story. And I think that’s true for a lot of writers.

Over the years I’ve taught several writing classes and been a member of several critique groups. I’ve heard wonderful story ideas and read excerpts from many mss that I felt could easily become novels, but when I’ve met those writers at later dates, and asked what’s up with the stories, the answer usually is…”Oh, I never finished that one. I started another
story. It’s really great. In it…”

So, as this year comes to a close and you start setting goals for next year, take a look back at what your goals were for this year. Did you stay on course or did you veer off? And if you drifted away from your original goal, why? Where the new projects really something you should have followed (Could be) or did your original path simply become difficult and you
took an easier route?

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One of my goals for 2011 was to blog every Wednesday. I did pretty well. I did miss a few (last week was one of those misses), and I’ll be missing the next two or three Wednesdays due to traveling. Or maybe I won’t. That’s the nice thing about laptops and the Internet. But if I don’t get a chance, I do want to wish everyone a marvelous Christmas (or whatever holiday you celebrate) and a Happy New Year. Set goals you think you can accomplish and
go forth and succeed.

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Don’t Talk About Your Story

Don’t talk about your book? That sounds like I’m giving advice opposite to what all the PR gurus tell us. Right?

Well, I don’t mean AFTER your book’s been published but BEFORE.

The more you talk about the story you’re going to write, the greater the chance you’ll lose that initial enthusiasm. I remember a gal who joined a local writers’ group I belonged to. We met twice a month and for weeks she would come to the meetings and tell us about her story. She worked out an elaborate plot outline and could describe each scene (especially the humorous ones) in great detail. Sometimes she’d come with a written scene or chapter and would read it to us. We would praise the piece or suggest ways we felt she could improve the scene, but that was as far as it ever went. She never wrote the book. And why?

“I got bored with it,” she told us. “And then I got this new idea. How’s this sound?” And she’d start off with another  story idea.

Her ideas were good, but by the time she’d finished telling  us and anyone who would listen about the story, it had become “old” to her. It lost its freshness. She lost her enthusiasm.

Now some writers can and need to develop complex plot outlines. Somehow, even after working on an outline for a year (Jeffery Deaver  does this), they still have the enthusiasm to write the entire book—and do so.  A detailed outline works for them, gives them the framework they need, but they  don’t talk about the story with everyone they meet, not in minute detail, over  and over.

Other writers will spend hours, days…weeks working on an outline, creating a framework that’s so detailed, it’s almost a book in itself.  (Years ago I read a synopsis for a mystery that was 99 pages long. She hoped to sell the book on the synopsis. I really don’t know if she did or not. I do  know, if I wrote a synopsis that long, it would be difficult for me to give the actual book a fresh approach.)

Often a new writer finds it safer to talk about a story that’s GOING TO BE written. An idea can be played with, modified, and strengthened with each new suggestion. There’s no chance that the idea won’t turn out exactly as imagined…after all, it’s still just an idea. If someone thinks the idea won’t sell…well, that person doesn’t understand the idea. (Or even worse, if the writer believes that opinion, the idea will be dropped, and maybe it was
a good idea. Maybe it was a great idea that simply hadn’t been tried before.)

It’s good to try an idea out on a few trusted friends, but the writer who truly wants to see that story in print knows the only way to accomplish that is to SIT DOWN AND WRITE IT.

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Writing and Exercise

This morning on CBS I watched a segment highlighting how a school in California has incorporated yoga into its daily curriculum. The result, the school administrator said, was fewer dropouts and higher test scores. The students claimed doing yoga helped them concentrate, think things through, and feel more relaxed.

I’ve been taking yoga classes since 2001. I started after shoulder and neck pain sent me to a chiropractor.  After the chiropractor helped ease the pain, I asked him what I could do on my own to prevent the pain returning. He recommended yoga, and so I signed up for a class.

And it’s helped.

There are different styles of yoga being taught, and over the years I’ve had several different instructors, each approaching the practice in different ways. Some use the proper sanskrit terms (asana, prana, pranayama), others use the common pose descriptions (down dog, child’s position, warrior 2). I’ve never done the style where they kick up the heat, nor the one where you move rapidly through the poses. I don’t think I’d like either of those, and I’m not sure sweating or moving rapidly through a pose is what my body needs.

As a writer, I’m often sitting in front of my computer, concentrating on a story for hours at a time. I forget to sit up straight, shoulders back. No, the more involved I become in my writing, the more I lean toward the computer’s monitor. I also don’t always remember to keep my hands supported (to avoid carpal tunnel), and I definitely forget to stand up and
move around. So, of course, the more I’m into a story, the more trouble I have with my back, my legs, and my neck.

I try to make it to two yoga classes a week. I do a few poses at home in between those classes, but not for any extended time and not on a regular schedule, and I definitely notice more physical discomfort when I miss class for any extended amount of time.

I also walk. Having a dog and living in a condo where I can’t simply let him loose when he needs to go out, forces me to walk. These aren’t the cardio vascular walks exercise gurus recommend. No we walk a ways and then he catches a scent he has to investigate so we pause as he checks out the scent. It may not be helping my heart all that much, but these walks help my legs and give me a chance to think.

Both the yoga and the walking, in my opinion, help with my writing. With yoga we’re told to clear our minds, let go of all thoughts for a while, to simply concentrate on our breathing and our body. With the walking, I can let thoughts wander in and out of my consciousness as Zuri and I head over to look at the lake (It’s wild today). With either activity, I return to my computer refreshed and ready to go to work. As a writer, that’s exactly what I need.

What exercises work for you? Why?

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Do Unto Others

Tomorrow is Thanksgiving, and I have much to be thankful for: family, health, and financial security. Sure, I wish I had gobs of money, no aches and pains, and a book on the New York Times best sellers’ list, but what truly brings happiness?

As we once again approach the Holiday Season, I’m worried about our society. It bothers me that Black Friday has become more important than the day before, that Christmas has become a savior for the economy, and books are being sold that tell us how to find happiness. Why have we made material goods so important? Why is the marriage of a woman on television and then her almost immediate divorce so enticing that it demands front page news?

I’m not an overly religious person, but I think we’ve lost something precious, and that’s a moral guideline. I believe in the Golden Rule: Do unto others as you would have done unto you. If everyone followed that rule, we wouldn’t have people being kicked out of their homes, stores being robbed, kids killing kids, and on and on.

I’ve written romance novels and now I’m writing mysteries. Why? Because in both genres there’s a positive conclusion. In the romances two people who complement each other finally realize they can find happiness together; in the mysteries, a wrong is righted and those doing the wrong are stopped.

In my books I can right the wrongs—good will overcome evil—but in life what I do personally has little impact on society. Nevertheless, this holiday season I’m going to avoid all stores that have forced their employees to cut short their Thanksgiving Holiday to come to work;  I’m going to support local businesses and buy American, whenever possible; and most of all, I’m going to take time to remember the real reason why we have these holidays…that it’s not for how much turkey you can eat, how many parties you can attend, or how many gifts you can buy or receive.

So…Happy Thanksgiving to one and all…and take time to do unto others as you would have done unto you.

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Reality or Fiction

I often use real events as jumping off points for my fiction. News articles and reports about two hunters who were killed not far from where I lived were what started me plotting THE CROWS, and then, just a few years later, the home owner who wouldn’t let the fire department on his land to put out a fire in his barn started me plotting AS THE CROW FLIES. But this week I had a reverse event occur.

For the last year I’ve been working on a story where a 74-year-old woman is attacked by two teenaged boys and instead of becoming the victim becomes the attacker herself.  And
guess what, a few days ago an 83-year-old woman who lives in Rockford, Illinois was attacked by two teenaged boys…and they ended up being walloped by her.

I love it!

For the sake of fiction (and I hope an interesting story), my 74-year-old is going to do a lot more damage to the boys who attack her, and instead of appearing on television the next day, flexing her muscles, my lady is going to deny she was involved in the incident. I have a feeling my protagonist has a much more interesting past than the 83-year-old I saw on
television, but who knows.

As writers we try to make our stories as realistic as possible. For me, it’s always interesting when my fiction parallels reality. It happened in my second romance with Harlequin. I was writing about a small town that I fashioned after the one I was living in at the time. After the book was published, one of the residents, who had read the book, asked how I’d found out about the incident since it had happened long before I’d moved there. I had to
laugh and tell her I didn’t know about it…I’d make it up.

Or maybe I didn’t and just thought I did. My mother-in-law was always talking about things that had happened in the past. Perhaps I simply took a bit of reality and twisted it into fiction.

The ideas for books are all around us. It’s just a matter of taking the idea and forming an interesting story. I’m trying to figure out how to work a story around a boat that exploded here a couple years ago. I’ve seen pictures taken of the boat right after the explosion, heard about the people who were thrown into the water, and even saw the burned out hull. The story’s there…somewhere.

What triggers your imagination?

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